Blurb
Charlaine and Rayleen get roofied and raped one night while out for a dinner and a movie night.
While recuperating Charlaine and Rayleen discover they both want to hunt down their rapists and kill them.
Nate and Brad’s luck runs out when Charlaine and Rayleen finally hunt them down in Berlin and they begin their journey to hell and learn firsthand what Charlaine and Rayleen have in store for them.
Review
I really don’t like giving negative reviews, so I’m going to turn this into constructive criticism. Mr. Orlov has an excellent plot about two women seeking revenge against the horrible men who had hurt them. However, I felt no sympathy whatsoever for the main characters, Charlaine and Rayleen, because I couldn’t feel their pain, anger, or need for vengeance. The writing was very mechanical with excessive telling and zero showing. Along with some typos, punctuation errors, and formatting issues, this was a difficult read.
2 Stars
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I am sorry you didn’t enjoy my novel Lion Eyes.
I understand that poorly written books with formatting, typos, and punctuation errors can be frustrating.
I try to improve on my previous book with each new book I write.
I retained a Book Editor for Lion Eyes, and he greatly helped me.
I double-checked that I sent you the correct version, and yes, I did. The version I sent you contains the changes from my Book Editor.
I will work on showing pain, anger, and vengeance. Perhaps you can show me how you do this.
Each of my books contains a statement that I am a retired computer consultant. Thus, I do not have a background in writing.
I learn from all my reviews and appreciate everyone’s help on Goodreads.
Dimitry Orlov